Wednesday 9 July 2008

Episode X: Georgia and the Magnet Warriors Part 5

The cloak fell to reveal a large metal structure. The helmet was in the shape of the ship in the sky, except for two eyes, a nose, and a toothy mouth.

“So, an exoskeleton”, the Doctor commented.
“Like a crab,” said Georgia.

The Doctor looked at her and Kolt leered.

“Anyway, I have my orders. You sabotaged the generator, and now you are here again on Magnet Warrior land,” Kolt snarled. “You will die, but the girl will be eaten. New food at last.” He got out a gun shaped weapon.
“Wow, is that a laser magnet 3000?” the Doctor asked, not paying attention to Captain Kolt’s words.
“Silence! I will have to stun you,” Kolt shouted, pulling the trigger.

Just as he did, the Doctor got out his Sonic Screwdriver.
“No need for that,” the Doctor said, as the Sonic Screwdriver bleeped. Captain Kolt screamed as he smashed through the ceiling and up into the sky. “As I thought, he was magnetic.”
“How come he didn’t fly up straight away?” Georgia asked.
“Well this room has a protective coating around it.” The Doctor explained. “A magnet can’t work in here. Just like their spaceship.”

Back on the 21st Conquer Ship, Commander Marr had lost contact with Kolt.

“Sir his chip says he’s still in London, near the factory,” Captain Rolandor told Marr.
“Wait! If he’s not in that room, then he’ll be flying up here,” Commander Marr roared “The Doctor defeated us again! All of you, get down there now! We’re sealing the factory and anti- magnetising it!”

So at once ten Warriors, including Captain Rolandor and Captain Flannir, teleported down to the factory.

The Doctor and Georgia were on the fourth floor in a computer lab.

“You see, they can change the magnetism that this factory gets,” the Doctor was explaining. “They can have one room not magnetised like Marr’s Office or the whole factory un-magnetised.”

The Doctor's face fell.

“Doctor, I can hear footsteps,” Georgia whispered. “And banging. They didn’t fly through the ceiling.”
“Right. We need to run!” the Doctor said quickly.

As the Doctor and Georgia were sprinting down the stairs, there was no sign of the magnet warriors above them, except the odd shout.

“Where are they?” Georgia asked the Doctor, panting.
“Keep running!” the Doctor ordered. “I’d hate it if one springs out on us.”

The Doctor struggled as they ran past the first floor door and a Magnet Warrior jumped out at them.

The Doctor kept running, hoping that Georgia was behind him. But as he ran out the door he realised she wasn’t. He looked through the glass front doors and saw Georgia struggling up the stairs, having been grabbed by the Magnet Warriors. He could just see her mouth the word 'Doctor' as she was dragged out of sight.

“I need help. I need...”

But the Doctor's sentence trailed off as he saw several helicopters flying over the factory and following them was... “The Valiant. UNIT!”

Colonel Mace was already readying several bombs to fire at the ship.

“The Valiant’s ready,” Captain Price informed them, peering through a window.
“Then haul out the net,” Colonel Mace ordered happily.

They were finally getting somewhere. Captain Gifford was on a phone.

“Haul out the net. Orders from Colonel Mace,” Captain Gifford said into the phone, just as the Doctor burst through the door. Colonel Mace turned round.
“Doctor. I’m glad you’re here,” Colonel Mace said.

Captain Price and Captain Gifford turned and stood up. They were about to salute the Doctor when Colonel Mace said “I wouldn’t salute”.

“Of course Sir,” Captain Price obeyed.

The Doctor saw Colonel Mace and Captain Price and smiled.

“Fantastic! Colonel Mace and Captain Price.”
“Right, I need to get up to the spaceship. Or talk to them,” The Doctor said.
“We’re transmitting a picture onto the ship now,” Captain Gifford explained. “I’ll just open a visual link.”
“Your good! Who are you?” the Doctor asked happily.
“Captain Gifford, Sir. He we go," Gifford replied, as he typed something on the keyboard, and on the large screen above the interior of the Ship appeared. There was Marr, Rolandor, Flannir and Georgia who was suddenly smiling.
“Who are they?” Commander Marr asked but the other Warriors didn’t answer.
“This is UNIT. You are speaking to Colonel Mace,” Colonel Mace replied, back at UNIT base.
“Well don’t interfere or this one gets killed,” Marr said as he grabbed Georgia.
“Too late,” the Doctor said. “You should leave right now or I will interfere some more.”
“Fine then she will die!” Commander Marr shouted, but Georgia slipped out of his grasp, and ran over to the controls. “Stop her!”
“It’s all right, she can’t read the buttons above the controls!” Captain Rolandor announced. “They’re written in magnusgrainish”. Georgia stared at the captain.
“No they’re not. They’re written in English,” Georgia argued.
“Don’t be stupid we can read it and it’s in Magnusgrainish,” Captain Flannir argued back.
“That’s English. I can’t read Magnusgrainish and that says shields down,” Georgia continued.
“She’s right! What about that?” Flannir asked pointing to another label.
“Explosive 3,” Georgia answered, frowning along with the two captains.
“Ah, his TARDIS is translating for her, if I’m correct, Doctor?” Commander Marr informed them all.
“No Georgia! Don’t you dare!” the Doctor muttered, but Georgia just looked at him, and then the controls.
“Valiant at the ready. Helicopters ready,” Captain Price informed Colonel Mace.
“Doctor, what are you doing?” Colonel Mace asked, as the Doctor fiddled with what looked like a metal coin. On the screen Georgia was staring at the Doctor, and Commander Marr was staring at her.
“If I can turn this coin magnetic, and if I make it very magnetic,” the Doctor was saying. “Then I can get up to the ship. Here we go.”
“Doctor no!” Colonel Mace shouted, as the Doctor zoomed out through a window, very quickly.

On board the ship, Georgia saw that the Doctor was going to try and stop her, so she had to do it now.

“Stop or I’ll press this button,” Georgia ordered. All the magnet Warriors turned around and started walking towards her.
“You’ll be sucked right out into the sky and your ship will explode!” Georgia shouted.

Back at UNIT, they were all watching intently. Captain Gifford’s phone rang and he answered it.

“Sir, Torchwood have got a plan to fire the ship out into space,” Captain Gifford informed UNIT.
“Wait for my order,” Colonel Mace replied.

Captain Gifford nodded and watched as Georgia shouted stop again, but without any reply. The Magnet Warriors were almost at her when she pressed Explosions 3. The ships controls on one side exploded. The people fell from the ship, Elizabeth among them.

“I’m going to die,” She said, falling, but then she bounced.

She was on a net. All around her people were falling and hugging. Elizabeth smiled then looked down, forgot that she was scared of heights, and fainted!

In UNIT, Colonel Mace said “Fire!" to UNIT, and the ship flew through the atmosphere.

On board the ship Georgia slid against a wall as the ship lurched, flying out of Earth’s atmosphere.

“You stupid little girl you foiled our plans now we will...” Commander Marr started but then stopped, as Georgia pressed shields down.

Commander Marr flew off into Space screaming, breaking the glass of the control rooms window as he did so. Georgia now knew it was her turn ,she was loosing her grip on the lever she was holding on too when the Doctor grabbed her.

“Well done”, the Doctor said, pushing her through a door into a room.

There it was; the Blue box. The Doctor and Georgia ran into the TARDIS as the ship around them exploded. Georgia gaped when she saw the TARDIS interior.

“It’s bigger on the inside!” she said laughing.

The TARDIS landed back at the park. Georgia ran off to see her mum, while the Doctor went over to help clear up the mess that littered the park. There was a lot of cleaning up to do. Georgia ran up to her mum and hugged her.

“I’m so sorry for loosing faith in you!” Elizabeth said hugging her.

Then from around the corner came Colin, and Georgia’s brother Richard. Georgia smiled as they all came in for a hug.

“It was weird, I was in my fish and chips shop down the road when the till lifted off the ground and started zooming away!” Richard was saying. “Then I ran after it, not wanting to lose the money. Then I met Dad who was running back to the house...”
“Brian was looking for you Georgia,” Elizabeth interrupted smiling.
“Well he didn’t find me,” Georgia replied. “I’ve gotta go somewhere. You find our torch, I saw it floating past the window!”

Georgia waved goodbye as Georgia’s family searched for their things.

Back at UNIT Colonel Mace was hugging Captain Price and Captain Gifford was hugging a female soldier. In Torchwood they were all hugging too, as they had sent the ship back into space.

The Doctor saw Georgia running towards him. He smiled and they hugged too.

“Well then Georgia, you were brilliant!” The Doctor said to Georgia, who was a little embarrassed. “Come with me Georgia you deserve some fun.”
“Wow of course I’ll come,” Georgia said happily. “But what is that thing?”
“It’s the TARDIS. It travels to anywhere through time and space!” the Doctor smiled. “Come on in.”

So Georgia ran into the TARDIS, and what a lot of adventures they had.

The end

4 comments:

Becky 5 October 2008 at 15:36  

Great ending, well done.

Bex
The-OncomingStorm

Anonymous 29 October 2008 at 10:21  

wow! that was amazing! im going to read them all!

Will 29 October 2008 at 10:22  

Thanks!!!

Seb 29 October 2008 at 16:43  

Yay Sharonxxx56 found our blog thank you for coming on our blog and I'm glad you enjoyed that story, I hope you enjoy them all!

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