Thursday, 26 February 2009

Fanfic Deleted Scenes!

This is a page for deleted scenes in the main series of our fanfic series! As each episode is released, any deleted scenes from it will be released here. Enjoy the scenes!

1.x Georgia and the Magnet Warriors

This scene was going to be before Georgia got home to look at the news in part 3 but after the Doctor managed to get away from the Magnet Warrior ship. It was when UNIT went to the street where Georgia worked to find that the Magnet Warriors had stopped the magnetising. It was removed because we wanted to get back to Georgia's story.

“FIRE!”,Commander Marr shouted as the TARDIS faded away.

Meanwhile, UNIT had arrived on the street where Georgia and Brian worked. Colonel Mace and Captain Price got out of the car to find the street covered in metallic debris and a few people lying injured on the floor.

"Get the medical officer here", Colonel Mace ordered.
"Yes Sir", a soldier replied.
"I think whatever was happening has stopped", Captain Price said slowly.
"Then we put the whole of UNIT on red alert for nothing", Captain Gifford said joining them.
"No, I don't think we've had the worst of the trouble yet", Colonel said.
"Contact Torchwood", Captain Price suggested, "They may have a way to destory the ship". Colonel Mace nodded and Captain Gifford got out his phone to contact Torchwood Cardiff.
"Shall I take UNIT off red alert sir?" Captain Price asked.
"No, keep UNIT on red alert", Colonel Mace ordered, "They could attack at any moment. Lets return to headquarters, and make sure someone cleans up this mess".

The next few scenes feature Brian. Most of them were deleted for time, this first one was deleted because we wanted the Doctor to get to UNIT:

“I need help. I need ..” but the doctors sentence trailed off as he saw several helicopters flying over the factory and following them was .. “The Valiant. UNIT!”

"Excuse me", a voice said from behind the Doctor, who turned round.
"Oh hello", the Doctor said, "Who are you?"
"I'm Brian", Brian replied, "Have you seen a girl".
"There are quite a few floating in the air", the Doctor said pointing to the dots in the sky.
"No her mum said she'd be on the ground", Brian explained, "She's with a man".
"Look if she's with another man then shouldn't you stop stalking her", the Doctor replied.
"No it's not like that", Brian replied, annoyed, "Her name's-"
"I haven't got time", the Doctor replied, "I need to go to UNIT!" The Doctor ran off leaving Brian looking annoyed in the middle of the empty street.

The Next scene is Brian again looking for Georgia. It was cut because the other scenes with Brian in were cut. Here it is:

“Doctor no!” Colonel Mace shouted as the doctor zoomed out through a window very quickly.

Brian, meanwhile, was still searching for Georgia. He realised that she might be in the Marr factory, so he ran through the strangely open gates and ran into reception. He ran past the reception desk and explored the lower floors.
"Georgia!" Brian shouted, "Where are you?" Brian heard a sound from one of the higher levels. He ran up the stairs following the noises. At one point he thought he heard a scream. He ran up to the eighth floor, but then the noise stopped. Brian walked down the corridor on the eighth floor.
"Georgia, it's me, Brian!" Brian called. He walked into the managers office. On the floor was a metallic circle with flashing lights on it. Brian looked around the office, but found nothing. He walked back down the corridor and back down the stairs.

The next scene was again deleted because the other scenes with Brian in were deleted. It is a very small scene, like some of the scenes around it. The people have just dropped onto a giant net:

The people fell from the ship. Elizabeth among them.
“I’m going to die”, She said falling but then she bounced.
She was on a net all around her people were falling and hugging. Elizabeth smiled then looked down, forgot that she was scared of heights and fainted!

On the ground Brian saw the people falling through the air and landing on the giant net suspended above him. Suddenly Brian's phone rang.
"Mum?" Brian said into the phone, "Are you OK? Good, you'e on a net. Yes, I can see the net. I'm glad you're OK. Why wasn't I there to help you? Errr..."

1.1 Conner

The following scene was altered because Conner was going to be the new companion, but Zac was saving Earth. Changing it gave Conner more to do, and allowed him to prove himself to the Doctor. This is the original scene, pretty much:

"Can you hear that? The Octopli are coming!"

Zac ran back to the Doctor who was crouched over the laptop.

"We can do this easily. All we have to do is hack into the system! Here we gp, password. It's usually a nickname or birthday," Zac said.
"Of course! Bringer of Death was his childhood nickname!" the Doctor grinned.
"Cheerful childhood," Zac muttered. "Here we go, menu!"
"What now?" the Doctor asked, peering at the screen.
"Doctor!" Georgia said, holding the door shut. "The Octopli are getting in!"
"Nearly there!" Zac called over to them.
"What are you doing now?" the Doctor asked him.
"Sending the Octopli a message: Abort the invasion! Get back to the spaceship!"

1.2 Maids, Myths and Monsters

This is a random scene between the Doctor and Conner, with Georgia looking at her phone, which takes place after the villager ask the Doctor for some money, while Georgia's phone acts strangely. It was cut because it didn't fit into the story as well as it could have, and it was simpler just to have Georgia come back to the scene, and get the story moving to the action. Afterwards the scene was altered so it appeared that Georgia's phone rang, and she went to answer it but there was no one there.

The Doctor pulled a small pouch of money from his pocket, and handed it to the woman.
"Oh thank you!" the woman cried. "What was your name again?"
"Him?" Conner asked. "He's Robin Hood!"

The woman thanked the Doctor again, and returned to her house. Georgia was stood near the TARDIS, looking on her phone. The screen kept flashing white, and random words from the internet kept apearring: glucose, umbrella, banned, Spidership, bottle, frog, Aquari, house, tempo, mortgage, ten pounds. Georgia tapped a number into the keypad, and pressed the call button.

"Mum?" Georgia said, placing the phone to her ear. "Oh come on, pick up!"

There was a beep and the phone went on to answer machine.

"Mum, can you call me if you get this message? It's just my phone's being wierd. Are you ok? How's Richard? Has dad got any further with that client who got knocked into by someone at skiing? That's it really... I just wanted to make sure you're all ok, with me being gone and everything. Oh and if you talk to Brian, tell him I've gone away, and that's why I'm not working at the shop. I hope he's alright with it. Tell him I'm sorry, but I can't come back to work. Not when I'm travelling. If only you could see it mum! It makes you realise there's more to life than keeping up appearances in the street! The size of it all, it's amazing! Anyway, I've got to go, who knows what the Doctor will get up to if I leave him alone for even five minutes! So I'll see you later, yeah? Call me back if you get the message."

Georgia ended the call. She wasn't sure even if the message would get through. There was another crackle and something flashed up on the screen. Georgia hadn't seen what it was, but she was sure she'd seen three eyes...

"What did you tell her I was Robin Hood for?" the Doctor asked Conner.
"You are!" Conner laughed. "You stole from the rich and gave it to the poor!"
"But we aren't supposed to be messing with time! You don't understand the rules, everything we do has consequences! Blimey, with the way we're going, the Reapers could turn up at any minute! You've just got to be more careful, that's all I'm saying."
"I'm sorry," Conner said. "But maybe this is where the rumours and myths of Robin Hood came from! Maybe he did exist, but he was you!"
"But what if he does exist, and he's out there somewhere?" the Doctor asked.
"The woman would have said something. Everyone knows Robin Hood's name! Marian, Guy of Guisbourne and the Sheriff of Notingham exist, so why not Robin Hood?"
"I suppose," the Doctor said, trying not to grin.
"There it is! That Time Lord smile! Come on, lighten up a bit! Robin Hood exists now!" Conner grinned.

Georgia walked back over to Conner and the Doctor, clutching her phone.

"I think I just became Robin Hood!" the Doctor grinned.
"And what?" Georgia laughed. "I'm your Maid Marian?"
"No," the real Maid Marian said, joining them. "I am."

1.4 The Demon Headmaster

In this episode Elizabeth and Colin were originally going to be in it. But there was no real point to there story in episode 4, so I just put them in episode 5. But here they are:

Elizabeth was sitting on a bench in the front garden. Colin had been snoring loudly in the living room, until she put a patch on his nose to stop him snoring. She was wearing a flowery hat. She then heard it, the TARDSIS materialising.

"Colin!" Elizabeth shouted causing Colin to wake up.
"What?" Colin asked, "And whats this on my nose?"
"Nothing!" Elizabeth shouted back, "Its the ship thingy! Georgia and the Doctor!"
"Are you sure?" Colin asked.
"Oh, it may have been Mr. Perkins mowing his lawn", Elizabeth said. Colin sighed, wondering why it hadn't sunk in to her head that Mr Perkins was dead.

The next scene also features Elizabeth and Colin:

Elizabeth and Colin were sitting down for their afternoon tea, discussing Richard.
"Yes, he's getting very unpredictable these days", Elizabeth said.
"Very", Colin agreed.
"I think we should visit him more often", Elizabeth suggested, "He might be getting lonely".
"Of course", Colin replied, sipping his tea.
"He has been acting quite odd recently", Elizabeth added.
"I'd noticed dear", Colin replied.
"Very odd actually, all he said to me at my party was Happy Birthday", Elizabeth said, "And gave me the present from Georgia and wandered off".
"Yes dear", Colin said.
"Are you going to say anything interesting?" Elizabeth asked Colin.
"Not really", Colin said, "Would you like another cup of tea?"

1.5 Slitheen School

This scene was deleted because I felt it was quicker to get straight onto the funeral, however, people have been asking when Conner, Georgia and the Doctor went to several places, that happened before Zac joined, but couldn't have happened before the Demon Headmaster. Here is the explanation, in the form of a deleted scene:

Georgia walked silently towards the TARDIS that stood outside St. Marks. The police had turned up at the school, and there were reporters and parents, and the students were being questioned.
"Excuse me miss, but were you hypnotised?" a TV reporter asked Catherine and Beth.
"What?" Catherine replied blankly.
"Were you hypnotised?" the TV reporter asked again.
"When?" Catherine asked.
"She's silly, let me talk," Beth interupted, "Hi mum! Yes I'm finally on the TV!"

Georgia walked into the TARDIS and shut the door, she found Conner and the Doctor talking inside.
"Georgia, to take your mind off what happened, we thought we'd go to past, Ancient Greece?" the Doctor asked, "Unless you don't want to travel anymore".
"Of course I do", Georgia said smiling, "As long as we return in time for the funeral".
"Have you said goodbye to Brian?" the Doctor asked.
"Yes, and my parents, but they're in shock," Georgia replied not looking at the Doctor.
"We can stay if you want," Conner told Georgia.
"No, I want to travel," Georgia explained, "It's one of the few things I'm sure about. Lets have loads of trips before we come back, so I can have time to get over it".
"If you're sure", the Doctor said pulling a lever. Outside the TARDIS, the police, reporters and students heard a strange sound and looked around to see nothing.

1.6 Spirits of the Past

This scene is a flashback to an unseen time with the Doctor and Georgia, which was cut because it distracted from the story, and it needed to get onto the action.

One of the giant pink Flamingos was following them. The Doctor turned to it.

"Hello! I'll name you Arthur!" he grinned.
"Doctor you've named all of the horses, the three badgers and that man eating hamster Arthur! Can't we have something else?" Georgia complained.

With a jangle of a harp, the scene faded. The Doctor and Georgia were running around a laboratory. A hamster was chasing them. It had sharp claws, and ran incredibly fast. The Doctor dived over desks to escape it. Georgia leapt onto a chair, trying not to scream.

"It's been genetically engineered!" the Doctor said, frowning as it chased him round a fish tank full of swimming sheep.
"What does that mean?" Georgia asked, grabbing a heavy book as it ran her way. "Is it like... A mutant?"
"No! You leave the little fella alone!" the Doctor said, as it tried to run up Georgia's chair leg. "It just means he isn't your average hamster!"
"You're telling me!" Georgia said as she wacked it with the heavy textbook.

The hamster fell down unconscious, and Georgia scrambled off the chair as the Doctor skidded down in front of the hamster. He cradled it in his arms.

"Awww you hurt Arthur!" the Doctor said soppily.
"You called a man eating hamster Arthur!" Georgia asked incredulously. "Doctor? What the -"

The scene faded again, and the Doctor was waving his arms.

"Let's stop that flashback right there!" he said quickly.
"Let's call him Pinky-Joe!" Conner grinned.
"The hamster's miles away!" the Doctor said.
"Not the hamster! The bloody Flamingo!" Conner said.

1.12 The Spidership

This scene was deleted because I thought that without the episode seemed to flow better, and it was more of a surprise when we found that Amy and Andrea had got on board.

Amy and Andrea squeezed through the crowd of people surrounding the red carpet that rolled up to the entrance of the Spidership.
"How about I knock out the guards?" Amy asked.
"No way, I'm not letting you use violence," Andrea replied.
"Are you going to use your scary gothy powers?" Amy asked.
"I'm an emo," Andrea snapped.
"Well what are we going to do?" Amy questioned.
"We distract the guards," Andrea said.
"How?" Amy asked.
"How many questions to you ask?" Andrea replied.
"Quite a few," Amy said, "How about you say 'look over there' and he looks and we sneak aboard?"
"Good idea sister," Andrea agreed.
"Come on then," Amy said. They were heading towards a think, long plank of wood, that attached the dock to a small door on the edge of the ship. Unfortunately, there was a Guard standing right beside it.

"Hello!" Amy said smiling.
"What do you want, little girl?" the Guard asked.
"How dare you call me little!" Amy roared.
"Amy! Look over there!" Andrea shouted pointing. The Guard and Amy looked around, but Andrea grabbed Amy and she realised that they were sneaking aboard.
"I don't see anything," the Guard commented, as Amy pushed him over the side of the dock into the sea. Andrea, annoyed that Amy had disobeyed her, grabbed Amy and walked her across the plank and onto the ship. The Guard swam over to a ladder, and climbed up it onto the dock, soaking wet.

"That was very naughty of you Amy!" Andrea said firmly.
"He called me little", Amy pointed out.
"And you pushed him into the sea", Andrea replied.
"So, there was a ladder, he'll be fine", Amy said and wandered off. Andrea sighed and followed her.

2.X The Boy Who Santa Claus Forgot

This scene was deleted because the last part of The Boy Who Santa Claus Forgot was all ready quite long and the episode looked fine without it, but here it is:

“And it will get into the Cybermen’s air vents”, the Doctor finished, “That’s a brilliant idea! Well let’s get to work!” So they did get to work. PC Walsh and the Doctor turned the gold into tiny gold pieces and Zac took boxes of gold dust up to Kaylie and Georgia who poured it into the fans. Some pieces fell onto the Cybermen below and Kaylie said she saw a couple of Cybermen fall over, dead.

“The Cybermen have seen us!” Georgia told Kaylie, pointing below. The Cybermen with guns started shooting up at Georgia and Kaylie. Just then Zac entered the room carrying a large box full of gold dust.
“What’s going on?” Zac asked.
“It’s the Cybermen they’re shooting at us”, Georgia explained, “Well, some of them”.
“But they’re missing”, Kaylie replied.
“Hey Kaylie do you still have that Santa Hat?” Georgia questioned. Kaylie nodded and took the hat out of her pocket. There was another large hole in the floor nearby. Georgia dropped the hat through the hole and it landed on the head of a Cyberman.

“What did you do?” Zac asked.
“I put a Santa Hat on it”, Georgia replied as PC Walsh entered the room with a box of gold dust.
“This is the second last box”, PC Walsh said, as the Doctor entered the room.
“Ready to turn on the fans?” the Doctor asked as he brought the last box to Georgia.

2.6 Message Received

This scene was deleted because I wanted to get to the discovering of Abasi and I didn't want part 5 to be really long, but here it is:

Georgia, Conner, Niina, Ryker and Captain Fry were sitting around tables in the Dining Room, Hannah and the Doctor had just left to look at the cells.

"So what year is this?" Georgia asked Niina.
"The Year 3 million and 6," Niina replied smiling, "Where do you come from?"
"Oh it's a very long way away," Georgia replied, "I haven't been this far forward in a while."
"What are you talking about?" Niina asked.
"Don't worry it's not important," Georgia said.

"Niina is there any chance of some food?" Ryker asked.
"I'll get some," Niina said.
"Hey, she's been through alot, why doesn't somebody else make food?" Georgia asked.
"We've been through a lot too," Captain Fry said.
"You know what I mean," Georgia snapped.
"It's all right Georgia it will take my mind off things," Niina said, walking through a door into the kitchen. Georgia could hear her fiddling with bowls.
"Where's the Doctor gone?" Georgia asked Conner.
"He went off with Hannah to look at the cells," Conner told her.
"With Hannah?" Georgia asked.
"Yeah, why are you jealous," Conner said.
"No! I just don't want more companions in the TARDIS," Georgia replied.
"The Doctor only takes the very best," Conner said.
"Yeah, then why has he asked Kirsty and Roxanne to come in the TARDIS?" Georgia asked.
"Because they were brilliant," Conner replied, as Niina emerged into the room carrying two trays.

"What's that?" Ryker asked.
"Comfort food," Niina said, "Chocolate sundae, chocolate brownie, chocolate kronkbruger and chocolate."
"Lots of chocolate then," Conner said smiling.

2.8 Black and Gold

This scene was a brief reference to The Empty Child. It was cut because it didn't help the story move along, and it meant that Fragmented and Black and Gold were set at a specific time when Jamie was converting people into Gas Mask Zombies.

Conner and Dorris left the second balcony, and ran back into the house. They stopped for a moment, and Conner pulled out his phone. He was about to dial a number, before it rang.

"What is that?" Dorris asked.
"A phone," Conner replied. "From the future. But I dunno who's ringing me - it's not Georgia or the Doctor, and nobody else could ring me here."

He answered it, falling silent. There was a crackling sound on the other end, before a high pitched voice spoke.

"Are you my mummy?"
"No," Conner said, taken aback. "Your mummy isn't here. Who is this?"
"Are you my mummy?" the voice repeated.
"Your mummy isn't here," Conner answered. "How are you calling me? This phone isn't from round here."
"Mummy?" the voice asked.
"I can't help you. Sorry," Conner sighed, hanging up.

Suddenly a noise from outside startled them. Conner and Dorris ran through the small office, and headed for the door. They reached it, grabbing the handle, when it flew open. Dorris was thrown over the top of the writing desk, and Conner slipped backwards into the bookcase, and was hit with several heavy books. Peter and Susan entered, surveying the room with blank, robotic eyes. Dorris clambered onto the desk, and snarled, baring her teeth. Conner crawled along the floor towards her, and hid behind the desk.

2.9 Snowfall in the City

This scene was the original opening for episode 9. It was changed dramatically so we could see the alien itself and so we could include Beth and the other recurring characters from Zac and Kaylie's school. Also the storyline changed, so the Doctor didn't realise he was on Pluto for a while.

The TARDIS doors burst open and the Doctor, Georgia, Conner, Zac and Kaylie ran inside.
"What the hell was that thing?" Georgia asked.
"I don't know, I didn't see it," the Doctor replied, as he pulled a leaver.
"Well it nicely disrupted our Biology GCSE," Zac commented, "Good alien, anyway can we track it?"
"I think so, since it used a teleport," the Doctor answered.
"So Zac how've you been?" Georgia asked.
"I've been fine thanks," Zac replied as the Doctor pressed a number of buttons, "And yourself?"
"Well other than being killed several times, I've been fine," Georgia replied smiling.
"Yeah but that happens everyday for us," Conner added.
"Everybody hold on," the Doctor said as the TARDIS shook and began to dematerialise.
"WHAT?" Kaylie roared, "I hope we aren't taking off, I don't want to go to another planet!"
"You said you'd like to know where the alien came from," Conner replied.
"Yes but not actually go to where the alien came from!" Kaylie replied, "Doctor I demand you put me back on Earth!" The Doctor, however, ignored her and Kaylie sighed.
"I'm telling you, if we end up on Pluto!" Kaylie siad unhappily, through gritted teeth. The TARDIS landed with a jolt and Kaylie fell over. The Doctor ran over to the doors and opened them.
"Where are we?" Conner asked the Doctor.
"Oh dear, we're on Pluto," the Doctor replied as he looked back at Kaylie who was now sulking.

The next two scenes were going to be in the episode, but its all explained later anyway so I didn't really see the point in them. Here's the first:

"Bored! Bored! Bored!" Georgis screamed.
"Calm down," Conner replied, but he was getting very bored himself, they had been locked in the cell for a very long time.
"Well maybe there's some way of getting out of the cell," Zac suggested, "Remember in Pirates of the Carribbean..."
"Yes I do, that won't work there's no bench," Georgia hastily replied.
"Georgia what are you sitting on?" Zac asked.
"Oh yeah," Georgia said looking down at the bench she was itting on, "But it's stuck to the floor."

"Can you hear footsteps?" Conner asked suddenly.
"Definately," Zac replied, looking up, as the footsteps grew louder.
"If it's Lord Komanfdu, tell him to go and..." Georgia began.
"It's not Lord Komanfdu," Conner interupted, "It's some of his guards."
"Look we made a deal," Zac began as the Guards opened the cell door and stormed into the cell.
"Get off me!" Georgia said as one of the Guards grabbed her, Conner started forward but was pushed back by another guard, and he hit his head badly on the wall.
"We made a deal!" Zac explained, "You can't go back on your word!" Zac was grabbed by two guards who dragged him out of the cell, followed closely by Georgia.
"Georgia!" Conner exclaimed, getting up from the floor, "Oh no!" A Guard slammed the cell door and locked it, as Georgia's screams of protest faded away.

Here's the second scene:

"All by myself..." Conner sang out of tune, "Don't wanna be." Suddenly, Ryoff entered the room with two other Plutonians.
"Conner!" Ryoff said.
"What's going on?" Conner asked, "Where's Georgia and Zac?"
"I'm sorry, their memories have been wiped," Ryoff replied, "But it is likely they can be returned."
"W-what?" Conner stuttered, "They've forgotten everything?"
"We think so," Ryoff replied, "But as I said they may be able to be returned. We need you to give evidence please."
"Of course I will, anything to stop Lord Komanfdu," Conner said, "We made a deal you see."
"You can tell the High Court, you are going to Pluton's balcony," Ryoff explained, as they walked away from the cells, "These two guards will escort you up there."
"Thank you," Conner answered.

2.12 Aquari Aquatics

There are a few scenes that I had to delete from this episode, some which ended up in episode 13. The whole episode ended up being extremely long anyway, so the scene deletions didn't really work. I like this scene but I deleted it:

“Who are you?” Captain Alton asked, with a look of strong interest on his face.
“What do you mean?” the Doctor asked.
“You aren’t from Earth, your from a far away place,” Captain Alton answered, “I think your an alien.”
“Well... you’ve got that right,” the Doctor replied, “My name’s the Doctor.”
“And who’re you?” Captain Alton asked Korena.
“I think her name really is Kimiko Nakamura sir,” Private Rolf said.
“Yeah, I’m Kimiko Nakamura,” Korena said smiling, as the Doctor’s sonic screwdriver began to flash and emit a beeping noise.

This line also had to be deleted because I deleted that scene:

The TARDIS began to fade away to the surprise of the guards.
“He’s an alien all right,” Captain Alton commented.

3.x Christmas Bells

This scene was cut as it was a nice reference to older episodes, but it didn't help the plot, which already needed moving on.

The bell had rang several minutes ago, and only Conner, Kaylie and Beth remained at school.

"I'll see you at home," Kaylie said to Conner.
"Okay," Conner replied, smiling gratefully at her. "See you later."

Kaylie left, and Beth took Conner's hand, leading him out of the back of the school. Sunlight streamed across their faces, even though it was October. They headed down the stone steps, until the reached the small garden Mrs Sow had insisted be built. The pair stopped at the large stone wall, and Beth pointed at the words etched at the top.

"The Spidership memorial," Conner read. "Oh..."

Below the words were rows upon rows of names of those who had died on the Spidership. First were the names of students and teachers of St. Mark's, followed by the staff, and UNIT soldiers and various others. Conner let go of Beth's hand, and ran his fingers along the stone, his fingers trailing over some of the names - Harry Ladbrook, David Bennet, Sue Bennet, and Conner Bennet, which had since been roughly scratched off, presumably when he'd returned.

"Tomorrow, it'll be exactly one year," Beth said quietly. "We're having a memorial assembly. You need to wear black. I was thinking, you know, that we could go together..."
"I'd like that," Conner blushed. "I miss them Beth. It's not right, having no parents. It's tough. I thought I had the Doctor to look after me, but now I'm not so sure. I miss him too. It's almost as if he's on this memorial too. When he disappears, he takes my life with me. Maybe I should be on there after all."
"Don't say that," Beth said, with a sad expression. "You've got me. That's enough, isn't it?"

Conner didn't reply, taking one last glance at the memorial, and the rough scratch that had torn through his name, and existance.

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